In a message dated 12/10/07 5:34:17 PM,
abrasax93@yahoo.com writes:
> > not many noir stories end with the hero
receiving a
> > medal, military
> > commission and chase kiss on the cheek from
a
> > princess
>
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> Sure, but he might receive a medal of valor like
Joe
> Pistone did, and a kiss from a society dame. You
have
> to revise the story to work within the new
context.
>
********* okay. he gets the medal so the military can cover
up the covert, illegal activities he did on behalf of
well-connected, rogue elements. and he gets a kiss but that's
all he'll ever get again since he got his dingus blown off in
the process
John Lau
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